Topic: Creative Writing

[muHammad_K]

Hi

[muHammad_K]

I would like to introduce some pieces of creative writing for comments etc.  
Hope you enjoy.


Please note.  

I advise that if someone wants to mention a story that if made up, then he should say, "he says", or say, "the author says", or the like.  

The way I've done it is to say that I have imagined a situation in which somebody in that situation says whatever (and that would be the bulk of the story, or sometimes a poem).

[muHammad_K]

In a fictitious, yet mirroring world, it is imagined that a woman reflecting on her childhood, in poetry, says:


HERO: True Man

Made my way,
running,
clutching doll.  
Happy.  
Noise of destruction.  
Didn't deter me.  
Going to see father.  
Missed him.  
Dearly.
He, there.  
My heart lit up.  
Crouched behind wreckage
of a car,
holding machine gun.  
Aiming.  
Firing.  
Ducking.  
Aiming and firing.  
Proud of father.  
Hero.  
True man.  
Caught sight of me,
looked straight at me
in shock.  
Why shocked?  
Why wasn't happy
to see beloved daughter?  
Still hear words,
see expression on face,
 
he:
"Shelter now!  
Not, be here!  
Not safe!  
Get away from me!"

"But Daddy
I love you!"  

Then something
not known, would ever see;
tears running,
down
father's face.

[Jaytsaana Zanilvaarianna]

[Advisor]

nice poem

[sofia]

very cleverly expressed!
Touching poem.
Very ambiguous though.
When reading the beginning i assumed in was based in palestine but my view altered towards the end.

[CrescentOfTheMoon]

its the first time that i see this kind of poems !
what do they call this kind ? Abreviated poems or something
heheh , hope if you can expound !:S
Salam ...

[muHammad_K]

I'm not sure what they call it but it is just a style I learnt.

[samsparky]

is it freeverse, & staccato? lol

[muHammad_K]

I'm not so sure, but it is just something I picked up  :-) 

[muHammad_K]

I would like to add some more writing.....