Topic: Is this a poem?????

[Sweetheart]

Poems can be written in many ways........in my journey through that poet path knowledge i learnt some of them. This indeed is a different and unfamiliar form of poetry but nontheless.......it is poetry !!!:a1


Its called a Graphic poem of four lines and the rest is visual.
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Oh
Why
Baby
Cryoh
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cryohwhybabycryoh
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why babycryohwhybabycry ohwhy
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I guess the bottle’s empty!
 
Can you tell me what you see? Can you come uo with a similar graphic yourself??

[SadaQa]

all i see is hi baby cry hehe
sister Sweetheart ,it is a realy bizar poem!.

[Sweetheart]

all i see is hi baby cry hehe
sister Sweetheart ,it is a realy bizar poem!.

Brother Sadaqa yes it is bazar but nonetheless a poem by the convention of the western culture and definition ,,,,surprisingly enough lol :rolleyes:

Look at it again and tell me what you see...........your saw wrong last time. See ! this poem is even confusing and indirect as most poems are...so it is a poem lol :hlp1 :lbw1

Try to unravel it again...........

Till then keep smilin'

[jasmin]

:confused: :confused:
what's this??

first of all i'm pretty sure it's not a poem:bsf5 :bsf5

what i see is

why baby cry oh
or oh why baby cry
right??

[Windy89]

?
What is the idea?
I see too that its ritten why baby cry?
What there must be?:s2

[Windy89]

Did you sweetheart see the think???

[Sweetheart]

Jasmine and windy this is a poem please beleive me loooool:apl1  I dont lie wallah i dont lie :hmp1 it is a graphic poem because the graphic tells the story with a few words and you --the reader--have to work out what it is saying, just like working out a common poem ;-)

Now ................i want both of you dear sis's to do something similar to what i have done.


BY using no more than 4 words, make a picture of something that completes the message of the words you chose. My pic tells a story but no one has yet told me what that story is.......all you have said is the words...and yes they are 'oh why baby cry'.

BUt what about the pic??? how does it fit into the words??

Tell me the full story of what you see in my STRANGE poem lool

....and i am looking forward to seeing your STRANGE poem too.

Hey !!! you dont even need a pencil and rubber to draw this pic. ;-)

Read you soon..........keep smilin' ;-)

[jasmin]

i pass

[Sweetheart]

No i will not accept that !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dont give up so easily.....life is not easy and you can learn to be a survivor in this forum as well.

SO work out my poem and make one yourself too !!

Yalla come on!! ;-)

[SadaQa]

telllllllllllllllll lllllllllll us sister Sweetheart
hehe